My Unimaginative Haiku

Inspired by Shovelheat's Imaginative One

Published on June 10, 2007 By uDigItTheMost In Writing

First line is five words
Then this line is seven words
And this one is five.

Comments

Jythier

on Jun 10, 2007

I especially like the fact that line two is 6 words.. I like it!

Shovelheat

on Jun 10, 2007

Ha! I've got you beat on unimaginative, UDigit!

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uDigItTheMost

on Jun 10, 2007

Jythier,

I especially like the fact that line two is 6 words.. I like it!

Well I did warn you I was unimaginative. Thanks for liking it anyway.

Shovel,

Ha! I've got you beat on unimaginative, UDigit!

I'll buy you a beer if you call it a tie.

Shovelheat

on Jun 10, 2007

I'll buy you a beer if you call it a tie.

DEAL!

InBloom

on Jun 11, 2007

Even on a sweet haiku you manage to show your smart alec-ness.

dynamaso

on Jun 11, 2007

Erm, hate to be picky but a haiku is 7-5-7 syllables, not words. Still, you did well with this one. And I thought is was high on the imagination scale too.

uDigItTheMost

on Jun 12, 2007

Rose,

Even on a sweet haiku you manage to show your smart alec-ness.

Is that a nice way of saying I'm a smartass?

Mark,

Erm, hate to be picky but a haiku is 7-5-7 syllables, not words. Still, you did well with this one. And I thought is was high on the imagination scale too.

Thanks!

Come on, mate you know you love being picky.

I really hate being picky but a haiki is 5-7-5 syllables. Sorry, I couldn't resist.

dynamaso

on Jun 12, 2007

Chris,

Oops, that'll teach me for trying to be a smart-arse, right? I actually did mean 5-7-5 but I guess even the best of us can get it wrong

uDigItTheMost

on Jun 13, 2007

Mark,

Oops, that'll teach me for trying to be a smart-arse, right? I actually did mean 5-7-5 but I guess even the best of us can get it wrong

I have had so many similar moments. I guess all you can do is laugh about it.

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