A JUWC Challenge
Published on March 10, 2008 By uDigItTheMost In Poetry

He always wanted a house of glass,

A fancy one on the beach,

But he wasn't from the upper class,

So he figured it was out of reach.

 

Karma made him win the Lotto,

Thankfully he's a Buddhist.

Bought the house so now he can model,

Yes, he's also a nudist.

 

His need for people to see him nude,

Is like a drug for a junkie,

He doesn't think it's a bit crude,

For folks to see his monkey.

 

It's why he got this see-through abode,

He loves to show off his ass,

Now would someone be as bold,

To please walk on pass.

 

 

 

 


Comments
on Mar 10, 2008

I was going to do a story but since I'm still working on it (read: I haven't started on it) I decided to try a poem.

I need to get outta first gear here and get to writing a story.

 

on Mar 10, 2008

This was great and most creative way in using monkey!

on Mar 10, 2008
Haha! Ah, nudity always makes for interesting writing.

~Zoo
on Mar 10, 2008

  Nudity, ass and monkeys all in the same poem.  Cool

on Mar 11, 2008

I really like it.  UDIG? hahaha

I love being surprised while reading, and this was fresh and well done.

on Mar 11, 2008
Nudity, ass and monkeys all in the same poem. Cool


Cool, I agree. Sounds like the making's of a great weekend.    Very creative UDig, I can't wait to read the story!
on Mar 11, 2008

I laughed out loud.  Well done.

on Mar 13, 2008
Kelly,
This was great and most creative way in using monkey!

Thanks, I wanted the bonus points.  

Zoo,
Haha! Ah, nudity always makes for interesting writing.

Ain't that the truth? Makes for interesting pics, too.   


on Mar 13, 2008
Mark,
Nudity, ass and monkeys all in the same poem. Cool

Thanks, mate. Sounds like this one bachelor party I intended once.   

Tova,
I really like it. UDIG? hahaha

Hey you said my name right. I do dig that.   

I love being surprised while reading, and this was fresh and well done.

Thanks so much.



on Mar 13, 2008
Roy,
Very creative UDig, I can't wait to read the story!

Thank you. Hopefully I'll get the story in here later today.

Dev,
I laughed out loud. Well done.

Thanks, Peter. I'm glad you enjoyed it.